Kinda out of the ordinary, I like it
Musically speaking, Awesome.
From a mixing standpoint, not so much. The drums get pretty lost under everything, which kinda detracts from the song as a whole. Your frequencies also feel kinda unbalanced, I hear low end coming from your pads mingling with the kick and sub frequencies and stuff like that, it makes things kinda muddy.
Overall, it's pretty good though, just put some time into learning how to get drums to pop and some EQ'ing and go from there.
Thank you, I appreciate the advice. I took it into consideration and remastered the track. Should sound better now.
Super dreamy and clean sounding, no joke, PM me when this is done
As MetalRenard said, the drums don't fit so well, and kinda get lost in the chorus, but it's gotta pretty catchy hook and feels like a good pop song should despite the drums, so good job ^.^
The song itself is fine but please render it as a file next time, sounds like you recorded it on a phone
I like it. Has a bit of an older style feel to it, which is refreshing. A couple things I notice though is that the percussion feels a little sparse, drums kinda become a little boring if it's just a kick and a clap, some hats here and there would help break it up a little bit, but overall it doesn't suffer massively for the lack of percussion. For the half timey part at about 55 seconds in I woulda used the bell-ish chords at the start of each bar in the second measure or something, because it felt a little empty to me.
I still think it's pretty sweet though
Thank you for the review! Also: Yes, the percussion is usually a bit lackluster on my end because, I dunno, i'm f*%$in lazy, and this song has literally been opened and closed for almost a year now, literally sitting in pieces, and this morning I decided "F**K IT, I'm gonna construct this and finish it BWWUUAAGHHHH"
So, many apologies for the subpar percussion, but thanks for the criticism! :D
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